Who needs a stylesheet?

An editor uses a stylesheet to make your book uniquely your own; a proofreader uses it to make sure style is consistent

What is style?

When a writer begins a first draft, it can feel a lot like throwing paint on a canvas. The outpouring of words on a page comes out in fits and starts and eventually the flow begins. Within the flow of a writer’s work, a style emerges.The language rhythm running through a writer’s work can be referred to as their “style.”

Some call this “voice” to delineate an author’s individual quirks and fancies for linguistic flourish. Voice also has to do with substance and theme. What does a writer write about and how? For the reader, style is experienced as seamless to the book experience.

Not only does style indicate an author’s distinctive language usage, it also specifies key terminology for the book such as names of places, characters, objects and ideas.

Style can also refer to the “school” of style a document adheres to: social sciences use APA style, book publishers use Chicago style, news organizations use AP style, etc. Organizations and businesses also may have their own “in-house” style that their communications materials employ.

For a book editor’s purpose, each manuscript has its own style, which is documented in a stylesheet. In publishing, a proofreader uses an editor’s stylesheet to check against the manuscript prior to print.

What’s in a stylesheet?

Once a book draft is complete and revision begins, authorial style can be traced by considering the manuscript as a whole. Style is identified during an editor’s first reading. An editor can help a writer develop a stylesheet by noting all the unusual words that need to be spelled a certain way within the manuscript.

For example, if a character’s name is Jacquie, you’d want to list it in a stylesheet so we know if the character is accidentally written as “Jackie,” we have to edit it. Unique phraseology (made-up words) and uncommon capitalization are also key elements to note.

Stylesheet terms should be listed in alphabetical order to make it easier to look up a term.

Formatting issues can also be addressed in a stylesheet to emphasize structural methodology and design elements within the text. If all interior monologues are italicized, with no quotation marks, the editor might notate this in a stylesheet for a proofreader to review.

If every chapter of a nonfiction manuscript has an introduction, three-point argument, summary and discussion questions, then this might be noted. A proofreader will then know to check that the structure is consistent through the work.

Any formatting notes can come before or after the alphabetical list of terms and phrases and should be provided to a proofreader if available.

Who needs a stylesheet?

Most books have a short list of style items that make them unique. Below I identify some types of manuscripts that benefit from a more in-depth stylesheet.

Series: If an author writes a book in a series, there are sure to be characters and places that overlap from book to book. Stylesheets aid in confirming that character names and locations are spelled correctly in all editions.

Series readers become hooked in part because they know what to expect from each book. If a series follows an established format, such as the opening chapter recaps the series overall, and the second chapter recaps events of the previous book, etc., it should be noted in a stylesheet.

An author can use a stylesheet as a checklist to make sure all the key points of their series style is addressed in a manuscript prepublication. These notes can be as in-depth or as general as is desired or needed.

Sci-Fi/Fantasy: These genre books contain unique worlds and creatures before untold. The power to create and imagine is infinite, and fantasy writers plumb the depths of new universes.

The Select Explorers of Venus the Eighth need to be able to tell their lava-guns from their magma-bombs. So, these proper nouns (Explorers of Venus the Eighth) and new-nouns (lava-guns, magma-bombs) should be identified as stylistically unique entities to remain unvarying in use and spelling throughout the book.

Self-published: DIY writers are often going it solo, so they need stylesheets to keep track of themselves. Double-checking one’s own work can be challenging but is worth the effort.

Developing one’s own stylesheet may also be revealing in terms of self-evaluation. By looking at their work through a stylesheet filter, a writer can see themselves through a reader’s eyes.

Make your style shine

An author might have an idea of their own style. They may even be confident in their writerly voice. But the outside eye of an experienced editor can help a writer identify and enhance traits they didn’t realize the work possessed.

A proofreader can take a stylesheet and make sure a writer’s style shines flawlessly throughout the work. Though admittedly impossible, who doesn’t want to aim for perfection?

A final word on style

No rules say you can’t change your style. Humans evolve, and one’s writing can shift from project to project. So an author’s voice and style may change over time. Yet honoring the readers’ expectations is what keeps me using stylesheets in my work. I want to help writers give readers the book experience they both want.


Val and Mike have a flair for identifying authors’ inimitable voices and polishing their work to develop their style. Contact them for help with your work: heartoflit@gmail.com.

Is your proofreader pro? Six ways to tell

Beyond spell check: Getting what you pay for in proofreading

I have lost count of how many times I’ve been the cleanup crew for another company purporting to be professional proofreaders/editors/publishers. Authors find me for help after their book is out in the world, serviced by subpar editors. They share with me disheartening complaints from their readers, who cite major errors in consistency, formatting, and grammar, along with the usual typos. These authors are (legitimately!) cautious about hiring editing services over the web.

This faux-editor trend is a challenge to professionals working in publishing: we not only have to correct the lamentable oversights of others, but we also must restore the once-burned author’s opinions of internet-located editing services. Editorial trust is built between a writer and editor once a relationship has been established, but if a writer’s already been scammed, the cost of entry can be high.

Here are six ways to vet your proofreader so you know what you are getting:

Read reviews

A great way to tell if a proofreader will do right by you is to see what clients have to say about them. Reviews will reveal if a proofreader is providing true quality services.

If you can’t find any reviews, take it as a warning sign to be careful. If there are loads of anonymous raves, be skeptical. Anyone can say anything on their own website. How can you believe the hype is real?

I can provide legitimate feedback from clients.

Request a sample

Proofreading requires a concentrated level of attention: we tune in when other readers go on autopilot. If you are deliberating between proofreaders, send a sample from your project to your potential proofreaders and request sample proofreads.

If the proofreader balks or requires payment for a work sample, that is a red flag to not hire that service. Any proofreader worthy of the title will offer some examples of their value-add to your manuscript.

Another bonus to getting a sample from a few places: you can see whose style meshes best with your work (and it might not be the lowest-priced option!).

Price check

My jaw still drops at the below-basement bids I encounter through clients who’ve worked with companies offering too-low pricing and too-fast turnaround. The practice is unreasonable and unscrupulous, yet those outside the industry (for example, first-time authors, my client base) will not recognize the ruse.

If the price appears too good to be true, it is! Sometimes wannabe-editors will underbid everyone so they can gain publishing creds by cutting their teeth on your unsuspecting manuscript. These inexperienced proofreaders are probably underqualified for the job and that’s why they’re cheap.

If they say they can edit 150,000 words in a week, consider: are they going to provide the thorough and close reading your project deserves? More likely, it will be a rush job consisting of spell-checking and grammar-checking through their word processing program. Seek out a few quotes (and samples) for comparison.

Get it in writing

A contract protecting your interests should be standard procedure when working with an unknown proofreader. This agreement should outline services provided, as well as costs and expectations regarding deadlines.

I recognize that client work is important and deserves the respect of a proofreader’s confidentiality. Prior to beginning work, I always draft an agreement for a writer to ensure the author’s work is safe with me. I do this not only to help authors feel comfortable handing over their prized drafts, but also to establish mutually agreed-upon terms of service.

Avoid anonymous edits

Have you noticed most web proofreading services don’t give you a choice of proofreader? Many companies farm out their projects to proofreaders anonymously. Notably, these proofreaders will not be available to the writers for follow-up and are therefore not accountable for their work.

I connect directly with authors. This personal relationship adds a layer of trust. It also creates accountability for the quality of the work.

Use a vetted service provider

On the web, anyone can say anything: even on reputed sites like LinkedIn, someone can call himself Executive Director of Dictionary Decision-Making. How do you know what to believe?

You’ll find vast value differences by using a high-quality, professionally vetted proofreading service. Hopefully you will trust my experience and not find out elsewhere, the hard way.


Val proofreads documents of all types, specializing in full-length books. Contact her for assistance with your project at heartoflit@gmail.com.

Proofreading to publish

When you are publishing a book in print, don’t rush the final product.

When you’ve spent months or even years on a book, finally publishing it is an exciting moment. Too often, though, writers will rush their publication due to print deadlines or general weariness from working on the project.

When you publish on the page, you cannot take mistakes back. Make sure it looks how you want it with a thorough proofread. Here are the basics to keep an eye on and correct as needed.

Typos

Spell-checking programs are absolutely a must for first and last step. But these programs cannot catch every glitchy keystroke. For example, a “rope” is an actual tool used to tie things, and “rape” is a verb of sexual violence. You would not want to accidentally type one if you meant the other, right? Most spell-check programs would pass over this error, even if it did not make sense.

Incorrect punctuation will also be missed by most grammar programs, such as when using a question mark when you want a period, or an infinity of other potential mix-ups. Additionally, style rules are so specific for varied arenas of writing, such as Chicago versus AP versus APA, that a generalized program like Word cannot catch them all.

Fact-checking

Even in made-up fiction worlds, fact-checking is critical. Truth becomes clutch in setting details especially. For example, what if the major highway in the story is going North and South, but all locals know that the freeway actually runs East and West? Bye, bye, believability!

What if someone puts a smartphone in a story pre-1999? Techy notes are signposts for the era, so in proofing we need to keep our eyes on these and similar elements.

Internal consistency

What is more troubling than an unreliable narrator? One who not only keeps changing his story, but also shifts his verb tense and point of view. A proofreader should catch any prose that does not flow in a cohesive manner. If in one paragraph “he” is thinking, then in the next paragraph we are inside “her” head, this is a red flag for a proofreader to note.

Similarly, if at one point an author refers to a Fire-Breathing Scab-Eating Mollusk, and in the next chapter it’s a fire-eating, blood-sucking mollusk, the astute proofreader must make notes for the author to review the discrepancy and choose his or her preferred style of terminology.

Formatting

Usually last to be reviewed (on paper, always!) but certainly not least in importance, the text formatting must be impeccable. Unfortunately, there are still many ways a textually flawless manuscript can come off looking subpar in the publishing realm. It takes a critical and patient eye to catch all the mistakes and make a book beautiful.

The chapter heads should be consistent and their page numbers must match the table of contents. Front matter should be ordered according to publishing standards. Fonts should be uniform throughout. One space after periods, please. Fix bad breaks, widows, and orphans. Disregarding these and other slight details makes for a slipshod product that you won’t care to share due to the low quality.

When it comes to readership, they will take notice if it’s bad. Many authors come to me after they’ve been flayed on Amazon a few times. And if it’s good, readers will have gotten what they deserve: a clean reading experience that allows them to immerse themselves without getting distracted by annoying typographic errors.

Judging books by covers

Sadly but truly, readers will judge your cover. Hire a professional designer if you can to take it up a notch, and ask to see a few options. Run these options by your ideal readership if you have a focus group (i.e., writing friends). Doing this will give you necessary perspective at this late stage in the process.

Let your editor or proofreader review your cover copy to certify its flawlessness. They can also check that it includes the keywords you need to grab your desired readers as soon as possible.

Help is here

No need to go it alone on your publishing journey. Hiring an experienced proofreader to help you will ensure you have a polished and presentable product.


Val has nearly 20 years of proofreading experience. Contact her at heartoflit@gmail.com.

The time has come my little friends to talk of other things

The time has come my little friends to talk of other things. Of shoes and ships and sealing wax, of cabbages and kings. And why the sea is boiling hot, and whether pigs have wings. Kaloo Kalay come run away with cabbages and kings. – Lewis Carroll, The Walrus and the Carpenter

Hey there, it’s been awhile. I owe Mike a Pile Of Review Responses and need to post 150 reviews at least. This is my favorite blog that I do, and it’s now September and I’m just making time for it. My New Year’s Resolution a long time ago to write more on HOL took a backseat to paying editorial gigs, sorry about that. I resolve to do better.

My co-editor and enabler Mr. Bahl is a forgiving chap and I appreciate that. The literature disco shall continue, even if I just robo-post one non-recent review a week for a while. Thanks for reading.

We are offering editorial services now, so dig in to our perfectionism, love and wisdom if you wish: heartoflit@gmail.com.

In love & lit,

vv

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